Showing posts with label comma. Show all posts
Showing posts with label comma. Show all posts

Wednesday, 15 December 2010

Time to accept the comma splice?

It's one of those things that drive some people mad in a 'Why can't people write in proper sentences?' sort of way.

I have to admit that seeing two sentences lazily strung together with nothing more than a comma has a similar effect on me.

Never heard of the comma splice?

Here's an example:

'We will endeavour to ship your order within three days, however it may take longer.'

There are actually two sentences here. One is:

'We will endeavour to ship your order within three days.'

The other is:

'However, it may take longer.'

English has a number of ways to join two sentences together. The trouble is that sticking a comma between them isn't one of them.

What you can do is use a conjunction, such as 'and' or 'but' (often preceded by a comma):

'We will endeavour to ship your order within three days, but it may take longer.'

Alternatively, why not just use a full stop?

'We will endeavour to ship your order within three days. However, it may take longer.'

... or a semi-colon?

'We will endeavour to ship your order within three days; however, it may take longer.'

However, could it be time to ditch the rule?

Sometimes, very well-written literature is littered with comma splices. It can have a real affect on the pace of the text.

For example, 'Say what you want, I don't care' suggests hurried speech, with little or no pause between 'want' and 'I'. 'Say what you want; I don't care' just doesn't have the same effect.

And if the usage has become so widespread, how do we distinguish between a 'good' comma splice and a 'bad' one?

If the rule has become that the comma splice is wrong unless it looks OK or it's a good piece of writing, then that's no rule at all.

And perhaps it would spare editors and proofreaders much agonising if we just did away with it!